3rd Quarter Submission Feedback

On Wednesday, March 21st, I presented my 3rd quarter submission to the class. After hearing their thoughts, I have a few things to fix that they suggested, and some other things I would like to fix as well. First off, I'm going to decrease the font size in my article down to size 14, as of right now it is at size 18. When I was creating my article I had the screen zoomed out, so the font appeared a lot smaller when I was editing it, compared to when I zoomed the screen back to normal size. Although, when I decrease the font size I know that I will have extra blank space in my article and I will need to fill it somehow. I could do this by either adding more content, or rearranging the layout and adding a quote, or another picture. Another feature I need to alter is the page numbering. I noticed that since my article is a two page spread, appearing side-by-side, the page numbers wouldn't both be on the right side of the page. So, I will need to change this so that the magazine article on the left will have its page number on the left, and the magazine article on the right will have its page number on the right. The last revision I would like to change, is something I decided upon, on my own. Since my magazine has four sections; Arts & Culture, Beaches, Theme Parks, and Outdoor recreation, I would like to include the category within the article. For example, since my featured article pertains to the Arts & Culture section I will have this listed in the top left hand corner of my article, and I will shift it sideways. By including this feature, it will give the article a little more detail and uniqueness.